poem
art
take broken hands
this spoken heart
part, fill, and
satisfy
with wage less free
still lucid be
bare threads he will
untie
patience it dips
nor loose it slips
sweep low a worn
relief
redress these eyes
his blood it buys
a faith
before
belief
posted by m. at 11/14/2005
4 Comments:
Did you write this? And if so, why didn't you submit it for the journal?
Lack of comunication I guess...I didn't realize there was going to be an actual journal...I thought we were just going to post the writing/poetry along side the art!
Oh well, Nichole said there is going to be another journal published in a few months? By then i should have more :)
It is beautiful. I am looking forward to reading the others you create.
You are so gifted!!!!!
it is an excellent poem.
there will be another journal.
I'm going to have to work extra hard on my next poem, everyone's was soo much better than mine!!!
miss you molly!
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